Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family. So, there is no need for the government to help them.
A lot of people these days prefer to solve important problems with the help from their family, whereas other prefer to be help by the government. I personally believe that the government’s help is better because it is more easier to get the support you needs by government. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is that the government have social authority to help their people. The problem can be easily to solve with their support. Take my classmate and I as an example, once we were conducting a field research as a important assignment to meet our graduation requirement. In that time, the difficulty of this field research is that we could not lend the place for us to start our investigation. Until we called to the offices of our government, they were very willing to support us to overcome our difficulties, and then eventually we finished this assignment very well.
The other reasons is that there are many resources we can easily get from our government. In contrast, there are limited resources from our family. Most of our parents do not have countless money to support their children’s life. However, we could easily get official supports from government, such as academic sponsor and scholarship. For instance, when I have done a great performance in my school. The Taipei government is greatfully to give me scholarship. When I got this extra sponsor from government, I could use them to cover my bills, account payable and the fees from books, leading my college life more comfortable.
In light of the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that the government can supports our lives and also benefits our future in general. The government plays an important role in our society. I can not wonder of there have no support from them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ent's help is better because it is more easier to get the support you needs by governm...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... we were conducting a field research as a important assignment to meet our gradua...
^
Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...trongly believe that the government can supports our lives and also benefits our future ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in contrast, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97394136808 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9136657605 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514657980456 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2092297584 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257657534429 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882525539325 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893696577457 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170590652046 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849183480547 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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