Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I disagree with the statement that people should sometime do things they do not enjoy doing. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, it is not required to follow something which we don’t really like, inasmuch as it is not safe for our health. For example, few decades ago, my uncle’s friend introduced him to smoking habits. Initially my uncle was not a smoker, after that he stated to smoke during social gatherings. Later he got addicted and stated to smoke like a chain smoker, and diagnosed with lung cancer at very early stage. He died at the age of forty years, and he had two young daughters. Now, there is no one to take care of the family since my passed away. My aunt and her two daughters became impecunious soon after my uncle’s death. Hence, it is not advisable to do something which we really don’t like it. As a result, it would hurt the individual and also the entire family. If my uncle had not been a chronic smoker he would have been alive today and took care of his family.
Secondly, it is not necessary to do something which we don’t prefer. This is because it will ultimately lead to discomforts. For instance, I am a pure vegetarian since my birth. Two days back, there was team lunch at nearby Mexico restaurant. I was not really interested to take part, but I had no other choice as it was office team lunch. I went to the restaurant and saw the menu card. I could hardly find any dishes on the vegetarian section. Unfortunately, I just ordered a lettuce green vegetable salad and a lime juice. Even though it was not sufficient for me, I had to eat that. All other my colleagues were having non-veg foods, which I don’t want to name here. I felt quite uncomfortable sitting next to non-veg as I got a headache due to the smell from the non-veg foods. Furthermore, I could not talk to anyone during lunch as everyone took a very long time to finish their lunch, which made me even more unpleasant situation for me. Therefore, it is not required to accept the invite which we really don’t enjoy. If I had not gone to that restaurant I would be happy and avoided my headache.
To recapitulate, for the aforementioned reasons I strongly believe that it is not required for people to do things they do not really enjoy doing it. Since, it would be quite a discomfort, and also spoils our health with bad habits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o the restaurant and saw the menu card. I could hardly find any dishes on the veg...
^
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...also spoils our health with bad habits.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56621004566 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65822850226 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8214047936 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4285714286 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60714285714 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167106914435 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476236383982 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13355917491 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204051965083 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18286697685 0.0645574589148 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.