Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “ A person should never make an important decision alone.”
In the life of every person is being a lot of issues that they must choose one way to solve or cross this issue. No one can deny that in his or her life does not confront any dilemma to require a right decision. With this regard, making a right decision needs an appropriate context to do any act. A controversial question raises in this issue that should a person make a decision lonely? In my opinion, I deny this idea and people should make a decision with other people to reach the best result, and my reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, every person has limited knowledge about everything, however, a group of people has presumably the wide range of information in each issue. Typically, making a decision about some issues requires specific knowledge about it and determining all aspects of this issue from various directions. One person has shortage information and might ignore some aspects of issues; therefore, making a decision, especially about life needs to consult with other people to take more advantage than when people are making a significant decision lonely. For example, in my life, when I made the decision about investing my money in the car business and selling automobiles, my father said me to change my decision to invest my money on building services because he predicted that car business confronted a huge stagnation and will be failed.
Secondly, doing every work needs a little patient to avoid any hasty action to perform each task. Doing any task without a correct thought about it leads the task to be done without any precision to get the best result. Particularly, making a decision on lonely can cause that person makes a decision without any thinking about an issue and even makes a quick decision. Consequently, in this decision, a person uses one’s natural instinct rather than rational and wisdom to make a decision will face some problems with oneself decision. For example, when proposed to marry with a girl, I was tempted by her beautiful external appearance and swiftly I made the decision to marry with her without considering the other attributes are accommodating with my attributes or not. After many years, I regret that what was doing in my life and why I made the decision without thinking.
All in all, everyone’s life has many various situations to make a decision, so the person should be aware of one’s act what affects his or her life. In summary, a decent decision should be made with not only considering all aspect of an issue, but also avoiding any quick decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 687, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...ness and selling automobiles, my father said me to change my decision to invest my m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69694855533 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475862068966 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3371585415 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.529411765 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5882352941 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241176549933 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937272597344 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652806784395 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171833732397 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472591659749 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.