Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been engaged in the great struggle to find appealing entertainments for their leisure time. These entertainments have changed dramatically over time. Nowadays, two of the most popular entertainments are fiction books and movies. Both of them have their own fans. In today's world, however, there is a heated controversy as to whether reading fiction is more enjoyable or watching movies. Generally, there doesn't exist a unanimous opinion toward this issue. There are numerous concealed and conspicuous elements and factors which are inextricably interwoven with one another that affect the popularity of an entertainment. While some people hold the opinion that watching movies is more enjoyable, others believe that reading fiction books is more appealing. As far as I am concerned, I have a penchant toward the latter on the grounds that reading fiction empowers the imagination. Additionally, reading a fiction novel or story gives an individual more liberty of using the time.
The foremost quality of an entertainment is empowering the imagination. This is not a made-up fact and is actually supported by scientific evidence. Recent statistics and results drawn from comprehensive researches conducted at the University of Michigan show that people are more interested in entertainments which stimulate their imagination. As far as imagination is concerned, fiction novels and stories are the most powerful tools. While reading a book, the reader usually imagines him or her as the main character of the story. It then gives the reader the ability to think of the character's emotions and future decisions. This doesn't happen in watching a movie. The difference is the intrinsic characteristic of reading and watching. Contrary to what most people think, reading is not an objective action. It is subjective, in fact. The main part of the brain conflicting during reading is the imagination then. However, imagination is not stimulated in watching a movie as one only pursues the action in the movie. All these stand to the reason that reading a fiction story or novel is more enjoyable than watching a movie.
Another element which distinguishes reading a fiction from watching a movie is the liberty one has while reading. One can sit in whatever position he or she likes for reading a book. He or she can also choose to read it in a paper book or in digital version on a tablet. Additionally, one can read as long as he or she likes or stops and analyzes every section. Also, one can communicate to others while reading a book. Watching a movie, however, is associated with some obligations. Imagine watching a movie in a movie theater. There is no pausing when one needs to go to the bathroom. You are not allowed to talk with friends about a scene and are not even able to answer a message on your mobile phone as it distracts the audience. All these rules have been passed for the sake of an audience, although, they make the audience act in compliance with specific regulations.
To draw the conclusion grounded on the above statements, I subscribe to the idea of reading a fiction story or novel being more enjoyable than watching a movie as it has numerous supporting evidence, two of which- that is- reading stimulating imagination and the liberty one has while reading a book in comparison to watching a movie are of utmost importance. As Gandhi once said and I am quoting, "Nothing pleases me more than sitting in my quiet room reading an amusing story of Rabindranath Tagger." Having this in mind, I would definitely strive for reading a fiction story in my free time rather than watching a movie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: doesn't
...le or watching movies. Generally, there doesnt exist a unanimous opinion toward this i...
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228148148148 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.179259259259 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0637037037037 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592592592593 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414814814815 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118518518519 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0711111111111 0.0351676179071 202% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.95603307281 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207407407407 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122962962963 0.0887237588012 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00740740740741 0.0209618222197 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103703703704 0.0139019557991 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3672.0 2387.08602151 154% => OK
No of words: 611.0 408.028673835 150% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00981996727 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368248772504 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296235679214 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191489361702 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13093289689 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95603307281 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459901800327 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.1286021343 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6684587814 169% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4571428571 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0707244748 48.84282405 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.914285714 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4571428571 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.257142857143 0.644075263715 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.0807107786 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.49206349206 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352604454336 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112685530735 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.086575181651 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.410478267556 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147754974947 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114997471605 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718310678941 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463037847529 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723865429451 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260114342674 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192790416788 0.0618886996521 31% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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