Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Admittedly, the young generation is resembling a propulsion engine of any society, so they are the most pivotal and determinant element in every society's flourishment. Therefore, the wise and right exploitation of this endowment requires enacting profound and visionary regulations by society. I believe that the rules that societies today are demanded the young people to follow and obey are too rigorous. I feel this way for two mains reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that exerting compulsorily rules and policies always is accompanied by limitation and imposing excessive pressure on youth which leads to generating some assortments of resentment and disorders feelings among them. Besides, confining young people is an obvious contradiction with their spiritual freedom and their massive potential energy which is embedded in their essence and would be depleted in the best possible ways. Rigorous dos and don'ts restrain their talent, imagination, and creativity. To be more specific, young people should be free to express themselves in different platforms until being able to know themselves and their inherent potentials much better. Therefore, having a dynamic and innovative young generation is a great endowment that is getting destroyed by exerting some wrong and unnecessary restrictions at the name of social or in some cases religious values, occasionally in some retarded societies.

Another reason that drives me to indicate is that the level of happiness and sense of satisfaction among young people are declining progressively and vividly which is resulted from a throbbing atmosphere and forcing them to consider some unnecessary societal rules. To put this into a more vivid picture, the rulers should provide such an environment that all stratum of society, especially the youth, have enough liberty to satisfy their material and spiritual needs which would be impossible unless providing them with suitable freedom and autonomy to appreciate themselves. Hence, having a vibrant and energized young people means having an up forward and progressive society which definitely will benefit the posterities.

Judging from what I have mentioned above I should reinforce my perspective that societies today, are expecting young people to follow and obey more strict rules. This is because we are not only observing a striking decline in their happiness and satisfaction rate but also their creativity and massive innate power are getting more demolished.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, i feel, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54871794872 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92447222659 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582051282051 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1679780222 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180226832599 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752671777061 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104375679491 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125773825731 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657072951383 0.0645574589148 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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