Smartphones are devices that are small yet accessible in every aspect, such as entertainment, news, communication, and social media. Due to their wide range of uses, no one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of smartphones. Considering all factors, if I were forced to choose, I would be on the side of good. My view on the topic is firm for a number of reasons, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the majority of the human population indeed carries smartphones in their pants or bags, and I affirm that there is a reason behind it, drawing on my personal experience. Unlike recent generations, I received my first phone in middle school, and the country in which I lived was dangerous as my parents were busy with work. To ensure my safety, they downloaded an app called Life360 that tracks my location and reports if I am in a place not desirable at a specific time. Through platforms, individuals can live their days with more assurance and safety.
On top of that, phones allow users to meet and connect through text, mail, voice, and video calls. My own experience is a compelling illustration of this statement. After my sister graduated and moved to South Korea to further her academic career, I could not talk to her as much as I did when we were in person. However, I can continue to spend time with her even if we are not physically together due to my phone. Moreover, with the eight-hour time difference, text messages make it easier to continue a conversation. Thus, smartphones allow society to connect even in adverse circumstances.
Last but not least, it contains and sends out important information. In contrast to the past, humans no longer have to utilize textbooks to obtain information. Currently, with our advanced technology and science, citizens can rapidly acquire and spread scientifically proven and opinion-based articles and other kinds of writing. Due to the wide use of smartphones, humans can go online to further debate particular topics, causing them to do further research, learn new subjects, and be aware of current news. Hence, smartphones allow people to obtain and spread important information.
Although there are disadvantages to smartphones, I truly believe that their advantages outweigh as mentioned in above reasons, which include increased safety and easy access to communication.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05050505051 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97971237679 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4202919336 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116887396296 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316064719241 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026343453072 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050842986501 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325217247046 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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