Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? some people say that the internet proviedes people with a lot of valuable information. others think access to much information craetes problems. Which veiw do you agree with?
In this progressive and sophisticated world, internet is one of the most central needs of human being witch should be fulfilled in order to improve the quality of life. When it comes to this point people have some debates as to whether a lot of valuable information witch be produce by the internet is worthwhile or it can create problems. Personally , I agree with the first group and in what followes, two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason comming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that the internet is a wide world of information that makes our life full of awareness. To be more specific, internet contain a wide range of information about divers issues like politics, science and economy that is vital for modern humans life. No one can deny the importance of politic in rest of the world. Internet delight us about politic mans acticities. For example, our mayor had taken bribes from a company to chang the function of some ceremoneis to advertise purposes and the evidence of this issue was published in the different virtual places. because of this issue, all of poloticians are carefull about their activities.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that internet make our life easier. nowadays people can do bonch of their work just with a click in a seconds. some people seat at their home and work with the internet and earn moneys. Furthermore, internet sells are very common and people are able to buy their staples and their needs with the internet. working and buying at home is enormously beneficial for both individuals and scociety and have a graet effect on the traffic inflamation. Therefore, people come out of the home just for doing essential works thet it whold be a good news for the globe and environment.
To sum up, based on all argumentations stated above, internet is very crucial for modern humans because can makes people life easier and can delighted humans in every places of this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65065274572 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2852072977 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18842651421 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673259893447 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678137462379 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107447247332 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655478098332 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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