Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for longer hours than to have a job where you work five day a week for shorter hours
In this progresive and sophisticated world, job is one the critical factors that can indicates a persons success. Among this, working time have a important effect on the quality of our life in the rest of the day and can change the ways of humans life. When it comes to this poin, people have some debates as to whether people should work few days for longer time or it is better to work more days for shorter hours. Personally, I agree with the later group and in what follows, two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is working for a shorter time for 5 days in a week is better because people have regular scheduls for the rest of the week. you can handle your time very well if you have a regular plan fo your day. You know that when you get up and go to work and after work you have your own plan fo free houres. My personal experience is a complling example of this. Three years ago, when i was a student, i had regular plan due to constant hours of my classes in the university in a week and my schedual was wery precise. I had addapted to this timing and it was very pleasent for me to had a regular plan every day. therefore i was such a successful person in the university. In contrast my roommate had a fewer classes but her clasess were very consise. Many times she was exhausted with this unregular plan.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that fewer working time is better for our health because we do not have to seat for a long time and we are not tired after the work. if we seat for a long time our skeletal system will be hurt for this reason we should work little hours in a day. For instance, my brother work for a long time in a day and he is tired the day after work and now he has a back and neck surgery.
To sum up, besed on all argumentatins stated above, its better to work every for short hours because the damage of this way is lower and its healthier mean and we have more regular schedul for everyday of our life. lets get ride of hustle and bustle of wakations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in contrast, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22167487685 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2792875081 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477832512315 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.692262855 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352586930514 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108420230609 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091308641529 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209787283711 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466769340259 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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