Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is critically important that we know when to lie and when to speak the truth. Personally, I believe that, sometimes, it is okay to be dishonest. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, in some circumstances, it is better to lie for the benefit of both the liar and the listener. This may be true when interacting with people who suffer from some specific diseases. It is more essential to comfort them rather than tell them the truth. My own experience is a compelling illustration of this. About 5 years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with dementia, which is a disease that causes people to forget things faster and in more quantity than others. There were a lot of nights in which I heard my grandfather suddenly wake up and scream in fear. The first few times this happened, I tried to calm him by telling him he had dementia. However, this led to him getting more anxious and afraid. For this reason, I decided that it would be better to just comfort him and put him back to sleep.
Secondly, there are some companies that treat their employees incredibly harshly. If one were to work in such a company, it would be better for him to lie in situations that would not harm any party. For instance, my father works in a company with strict rules. When he was working in their building, he was not allowed to do anything else during work hours. This made him lose motivation to work and harmed the company. However, when he started working from home due to Covid-19, he became much more productive. The reason was he sometimes used work hours to spend time on himself. This improved his morale, hence leading him to work with more passion. When his boss asked why he became more productive, he told them it was because he stayed focused on his work. He did not tell the truth because he knew he would get punished if he did so. As a result, by lying, he improved his mental health and became the employee of the month.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, sometimes, it is better to lie. This is because it will only hurt to tell the truth to some patients, and it will help companies make more money to lie to them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46115288221 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46915380201 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516290726817 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4706966237 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.2 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899776571033 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299306809596 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390346807852 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555955583654 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211700971538 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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