Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that honesty is a trait that everyone needs to acquire. In the given scenario, it is perceived it does not make any difference if we be dishonest sometimes. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we could not be better person if we are not honest with ourself as well others. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, no can pave the path of success with dishonesty. To be more precise, we need to be loyal to everyone if not then it will be of our own loss. Drawing from my own experience, one of my co worker used to make excuses to perform any of the assigned task. She even used to make fake excuse of her heath condition and take a leave from work. Needless to say, this activity of her hampered herself rather than other staffs as work could be done by anyone however she lose the chance to learn new lesson from the task. Thus, if we think bad of others then it will return to us in a different way.
Secondly, once the person get accustomed to do bad deeds for their comfort, he could not resist himself from doing it. In addition, things goes even worse than it was thought . I have witnessed this in my own personal life. My co worker again for instance, she was habituated for making false excuse nevertheless this did not work in long run. Eventually, her deeds was caught red handed and got fired instantly. Therefore, nothing can be accomplished if we have false intention. Sooner or later it will return to us which devastate our path of success.
The above statement sounds reasonable as it is said that if our intention is right then it does not matter for being dishonest. To exemplify, if a child’s condition is severe and if we become disloyal top her mother by saying he is good to procure sympathy to her then this is good as the intention was obvious. However, this does not happen in all case.
All things considered, we reap what we sow therefore being disloyal is not welcoming as this will make our life our life even worse.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loses'.
Suggestion: loses
...ork could be done by anyone however she lose the chance to learn new lesson from the...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...bad of others then it will return to us in a different way. Secondly, once the person get accusto...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to doing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to doing
...ent way. Secondly, once the person get accustomed to do bad deeds for their comfort, he could n...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ings goes even worse than it was thought . I have witnessed this in my own persona...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is good to procure sympathy to her then this is good as the intention was obviou...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'our life'.
Suggestion: our life
...oyal is not welcoming as this will make our life our life even worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41534391534 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45731020527 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1201395728 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4761904762 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112896525175 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352850949621 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409685935415 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657504522808 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320937090201 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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