Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Maintaining an intimate relationship can be very difficult in today’s world, and there are many aspects of our interactions with others that we need to worry about. From my perspective, there are times that it is better to not tell the truth to others. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, telling small lies sometimes motivates people. Humans are so competitive and they want to be the best at whatever task they are completing. Whether they are involved in an athletic event or taking a test at school, they will be more motivated if they think it is possible that they achieve impressive results. In these situations, lying about their potential can encourage them to perform well. My brother is a compelling example of this. Last year, he signed up for a marathon in our city. Although I knew that it would be an arduous task for him to even endure to the end, I lied and said to him that he had a great chance to win. This gave him a lot of confidence and he did his best at the marathon.
Secondly, trivial lies told to protect someone’s feeling can be beneficial to sustain good relationships. For instance, last week a colleague asked my opinion on her new hair style. Although I though it looks terrible, I told her she looked stylish. If I had told the truth, I would have hurt her feelings and even jeopardized our friendship. So white lies can benefit social interactions.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in some situations it is better to not be completely honest and tell the truth. This is because small lies can motivate people to try harder; also, white lies help us avoid awkward social situations and not damage our relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'tell' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: protecting
... marathon. Secondly, trivial lies told to protect someone's feeling can be beneficia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66885245902 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78758718258 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2076224008 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659832470889 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255493050584 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449147753394 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503314296831 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03692978042 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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