Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Maintaining relationships and having a good personality is one of the most difficult tasks in our era and there are many aspects in our life we have to evaluate in order to be a successful person. Telling the truth is one of the most significant aspects of every individual’s life that should not be ignored. While some people believe that it is necessary to tell truth in our relationships, others hold the view that it is better not to tell all truths. Personally, I am of the view of the latter opinion and I believe people should tell tiny lies in some situations. In what follows, I will explore my reasons.
To begin with, a little bit lying not only helps individual be more incentive, but also it makes them to believe that someone backs them up them in every occasions, whether they are able to make it or fail that situation. An example of mine can illustrate this fact. My husband signed up for a Marathon last year. Although I knew that he couldn’t finish the race, I kept talking to him that he was so powerful enough to end this up and he would be in ten tops. This gave him a motivation to participate the race with more confidence both during and before the competition. However, he didn’t pass the last line; he recognized that I will be supporting him in every occasions.
The next equally important reason is that by not telling truth, one can avoid anxiety and make others feel better about them. Telling harmful truths will hurt some people both mentally and emotionally. If people, instead of telling real things that may make others upset, tell a little bit lies, it will not cause others to lose their self-confidence. For example, last week, my colleague asked me about how well her hairstyle was. Being honest, I told that it wasn’t right and the color was awful. However, she didn’t get upset at the moment, I felt that she became so embarrassed and next day, she changed her hairstyle. I realized how telling lie could have given her a sense of self-confidence. Had I not told my real opinion, she could have been happier and more positive about herself next day.
To put it briefly, taking into account all aforementioned reasons and examples, I think it is more beneficial to tell lies and avoid being honest. I do believe that because sometimes telling a little lie would motivate people and give them a sense of supporting and caring and also, we can avoid hurting others’ feeling and emotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... explore my reasons. To begin with, a little bit lying not only helps individual be more...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ings that may make others upset, tell a little bit lies, it will not cause others to lose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69515011547 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77405950378 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528868360277 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7161708894 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8095238095 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121093615343 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377469207282 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434286393091 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789944492247 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316659673864 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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