Telling the truth is always considered as a moral behaviour which was taught by telling different moral stories in our childhood. In my opinion, sometimes it is better to tell lie than a truth.to avoid critical consequences and to maintain a healthy relationship. I feel this way for mainly two reasons which i will explore in the ensuing paragraph with conspicuous examples.
First of all, telling a small lie sometimes helps us to preclude occurring unfavourable circumstances which can be detrimental to a life of a person we really care about. Sometimes a painful truth leads to deterioration of health of a patient having heart problem or a elderly person. My own experience is a good example of this. When i was ten my grandparents met an accident during their travelling by bus. My grand father died on that day of accident as he was injured severely and although my grandmother was not that injured and she was in stable condition after providing first aid but her health deteriorated just after getting the news of my grandfather and after two days she got paralyzed. If we had not tell the difficult truth immediately, we would avoid such circumstances.
Secondly, small lies help us in maintaining healthy relationships which helps to concentrate on our works without any mental conflicts or anxiety. Sometimes we tell some bitter truths to the people which ruin relationship and leads to mental conflict that affect our productivity and destroy mental peace. let me cite an example to shed light on this perspective. Once my best friend had a new haircut and asked me how she was looking. I said that was awful. Although She did not say me anything but she looked really upset. After this incident i teemed with anguish and guilt for which i could not do my work with full concentration on that day. Albeit I apologised later and everything got resolved still feel whether she holds grudge against me. If i said her hairstyle was good i would have avoided such mental conflicts and guilt.
In conclusion, telling minor lies are by no means detrimental as it helps you to maintain a good relationship and to eschew grave consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87738419619 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93132800733 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569482288828 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5979474088 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2105263158 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120265420484 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387035189342 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439480503331 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874118508889 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469467154364 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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