Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Telling the truth always is seen as moral behavior. When we were young, people always told us the story, "Washington cut the cherry tree," and encourage us to be an honest person. However, I think that telling the truth is not always appropriate. On the contrary, in some situation, it will be better when we behave oppositely. There are two reasons I will explore in the following essays.
First of all, telling the truth sometimes ruins the atmosphere in a conversation. Since people do not like the disagreement and judgment, saying the real opinion of our own would be risky in a discussion. Take my family dinners as examples, people who behaved too honest has made the furious arguments many times. In one of our recent family parties, my uncle made a discussion about the presidential election which was approaching in these months. However, my aunt, who is the supporter of the opposite party, gave a critical judgment on my uncle's opinions. The atmosphere at the party became embarrassed then more and more nervous. In the end, the debate turned into a terrible fight, and we stopped the party in a sad ending. This experience demonstrates that exposing the actual opinion in some situation would ruin a conversation.
Secondly, it is difficult to explain a truth thoroughly, and others might misunderstand us. Sometimes when we make a decision, we consider several aspects of the event. It might be hard for other people to understand how complicated the problem we met, and they would judge the things in their perspectives. For example, there was one time that my friend asked me for accompanying her because she lost her family member recently. But, after that day, I had a big assignment needed to hand out. Too worried about her, I chose to be the side of my friend and could not finish the homework on time. In the class, I told my teacher the truth, but she could not accept this reason and thought it was just the excuse for the delay. Therefore, after this experience, I prefer giving the reasons which are allowed all the time rather than telling the truth.
In conclusion, I believe that sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Based on my experience, sometimes telling the truth would be risky in some situations and make ourselves misunderstood by others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83248730964 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80357034859 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545685279188 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7412865868 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7826086957 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1304347826 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144711474236 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510422499983 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633690120465 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107589087855 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545829839478 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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