Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.
Undoubtedly, attending at universities is great juncture of life in which students learn invaluable lessons. In effort to make this period more fruitful, they follow several plans and norms. One of the determining factors involved in students' life is the necesstiy of having a part-time job. In this regard, choosing the best strategy has caused a heated controversy. Some people claim that students shuold not have job during their studeies. While others believe otherwise. The idea to which I subscribe is that having career is beneficial for students. My viewpoint is based on quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, by having a part-time job, they will have new experiences which are helpful for their future life. In other words, being in workplace may contribute them several things, namely perservance, encountering with opposing views, and team working, to name but a few. In addition they can obtain priceless work experience, which is absolutely essential for for finding job. More over, they will be more successful in their future profession because they can easily adopt to their work place and know how to get promotion. Statistics also have demonstrated that employees who have had part time job often have better performance in comparison with otherwise people. Accordingly, educational managers and governments should grant their unqualifed support for creating part-time jobs.
Additioanlly, students having career can afford their needs, which leads to become independence. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that independent students often are more strong in the amid of difficulties. For example, my brother worked when he was a student, and become become independent soon, and by he usually acts in a reasonable fashion. However, students who do not have worked duting their studies are usually dependent on their parents and cannot decide a proper decision in crisis.
Eventually, students who have part-time jobs often are healthier both physically and mentally. In fact they enjoy positive feelings and usually have stronger bodies. In contrast, other students usually have stress becouse of their future and often look tired and weak. It should be mentioned that it is true that by having part time job, student will have less time for studies. However, students should bite the bullet and try hard to compensate the shortage of time.
To sum up, I have a penchant for the idea that students should have part-time jobs because of aforementioned reasons. Therefore, it is highly recommended that students do not take having a profession during their studies for granted, which can pave the way to more successful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...ple claim that students shuold not have job during their studeies. While others bel...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...and team working, to name but a few. In addition they can obtain priceless work experien...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...ain priceless work experience, which is absolutely essential for for finding job. More over, they wi...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
...perience, which is absolutely essential for for finding job. More over, they will be mo...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ture profession because they can easily adopt to their work place and know how to get pr...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...emonstrated that employees who have had part time job often have better performance in co...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: become
...other worked when he was a student, and become become independent soon, and by he usually act...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable fashion" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ndependent soon, and by he usually acts in a reasonable fashion. However, students who do not have work...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...entioned that it is true that by having part time job, student will have less time for st...
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Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to compensate the shortage of time. To sum up, I have a penchant for the ide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, in other words, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32558139535 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83263451228 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3719344132 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251123163784 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815132669061 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595119215076 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161633137291 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464247047762 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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