People harbor different perception of being successful in their future perspective. While it has been argued that a high educational background can play a critical role in everyone's success, other believe that people with developed social circle have better opportunity to gain prosperity. To the best of my knowledge, the former trend seems more logical to have a successful career based on the following concerns.
First and foremost justification to support this is that knowledge accompanied with practical experience have paved the way for achieving a higher level in the social ladder. In fact, recent studies have revealed that many tycoons and successful businessmen improve their level knowledge by taking up academic subjects. It should be noted that for being a pioneer in the different work field, it is necessary to have enough expertise in at least a main subject to competing with other's rivals in the specific scope. In addition, experience and skills are required for job-seekers to distinguish the difference between opportunity and threat. However, this level of adroitness are not transferable at traditional learning process and any individuals might be involved in a real workplace situation. Therefore, regarding the changing environment in the current job market, a knowledgeable applicant with a high level of dexterity has a better chance to progress.
On the other hand, the role of communication skill has brought upstanding triumph for successful people. Firstly, the communication, at broad perspective, is known as any abilities to socialize with others and have a better understanding of other's obstacles and difficulties. In this regard, one with a high level communication skill, for example in the marketing field, is able to address problems in after-sale service and be a successful person in his position. Moreover, having a broad social circle not only allow people to get informed on the latest news but also might consider as a door to put forth from concealed opportunity.
From what have been discussed, experience and knowledge are the most contributory factors for achieving prosperity. As it was mentioned, these two factors allow any job-seeker have a competing advantage to overcome other rivals. However, contact with more people has its own redeeming feature.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255050505051 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.169191919192 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123737373737 0.0866891130778 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0328282828283 0.046263068375 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0227272727273 0.0685040099705 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131313131313 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0707070707071 0.0351676179071 201% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.07970210176 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328282828283 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.00188951952338 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.0984848484848 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010101010101 0.0209618222197 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00252525252525 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2316.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 361.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41551246537 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426592797784 0.338922669872 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329639889197 0.251872472559 131% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.260387811634 0.174417080927 149% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.210526315789 0.112833075102 187% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.07970210176 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562326869806 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.1393763845 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5625 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7275388585 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 55.5264889197 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 2.03370786517 1.45489161554 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385360325668 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0830621442152 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0419829240436 0.0752933317313 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494688049272 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0873333154814 0.151897553556 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148893165979 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760122731417 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327241049287 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111017643595 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255057551234 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744276008306 0.0618886996521 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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