There is no shortage of debate whether movies are popular or not. In my opinion, I firmly believe that human beings need entertainment in their life that can be provided by film. The reasons for watching a film are: to gain knowledge, able to do conversations with international people, and helps to find a job. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are a source of information which advocates all the people in the world. It is very imperative for gaining a piece of knowledge. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used to watch science fiction- movies. That movie was based on the principle of gravitational force: which has helped me to think in different ways. I used to imagine the universe and tried to find out the finding and discovery. As a result, this movie has motivated me to study science. I was admired by watching that movie and finally decide to shape my career as a scientist. However, I was in confusion about my gaol before watching that movie.
Secondly, I considered movie like the university because people attend university to gain knowledge. The movie is another source of knowledge; as it shows very important information. For example, when I watched a movie: History of Nepal. It provides background information on Nepal which I had also studied in my course. I enjoy and gain knowledge by watching a movie; although, I had not cared in the class. There are different methods of learning among them watching movies is one of the best ways.
Finally, the movie is presented in different languages, which would also help to comprehend various languages. For instance, I used to watch Korean movies, when I was in high school. By watching this movie I was able to do conversation in the Korean language. Now i have a project in a travel agency; I take Korean tourists to different parts of our country. Consequently, I am doing that job and being financially strong. If hadn't watched a Korean movie, I wouldn't have been involved in this job. So, I feel that watching a movie can benefit all people.
To sum up, watching a movie is worth to all the people this is because it helps in an academic career, Provides fun, and makes financially strong. Therefore, the best way to enhance our lives is to watch movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67632850242 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77118309811 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.360855974 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1428571429 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520465276088 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160060101011 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278455808566 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343912914083 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032795860023 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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