Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers or pedagogues are the builder of the nation. Their influences are infinitesimal to form an influential and discreet nation where, the students are not hesitant to differentiate what is right and what is wrong. The students should not know their teachers societal and political ideology in class room is the given excerpt- someone would concede with this, others would not. In my view, teachers should disclose their beliefs in front of their pupils for greater good because of the following two important reason.
The main reason is that students are influenced most by their teachers especially what is their social activities. In our society, teachers are often engaged to remove various prejudices such as, dowry, social concerns regarding girls education and also health related campaign. For example, when, I was reading in class eight, I came to know one our Bangla teacher. His name was Md. Abdul Kalam and he was very popular in our class. Because, he often told us to drive our society in a good way. He was well known person in our city because his efforts had helped our city to banned child marriage. Often time he told us about the negative impacts of child marriage in our class and inspired us to thwart that prejudices. This experience taught me that, if change is good for cumulative people and it is possible to become inspire someone like teacher, then it is great to being a student of this teacher.
Another reason is that teachers helps us to become a discreet individual by displaying their political beliefs. We are living in a society where many people have many beliefs. And we are often get confused what is right belief and what is wrong? Earlier in our life if we got the change to become clear about that, then, it will helps us to build a strong outlook regarding politics. To be more specific, in our class in 2010, when, Bangladesh were rifted by two parties. We were not considerable enough which party was good for our national and which was not? On that time, our class teacher came forward to crystalize about the politics. And he said, for our country and especially for peace loving people, politics is not a good choice rather it will bring unhappy consequences. On that day, I was firm in my choice not to involve in any politics. As you can see that, teachers political clarification was good for students future.
In conclusion, someone would provide enough argument to prove the potential harm to disclose the teachers political or social beliefs in front of their students but in long run this type of proposition will not convincing to hold. Telling teachers beliefs not only inspire students but also make them discreet for future choice. So, our teacher should take the role to tell their stories in class.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m and he was very popular in our class. Because, he often told us to drive our society ...
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...meone like teacher, then it is great to being a student of this teacher. Another r...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... become clear about that, then, it will helps us to build a strong outlook regarding ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'convince'
Suggestion: convince
...g run this type of proposition will not convincing to hold. Telling teachers beliefs not o...
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Message: Did you mean 'holding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: holding
...type of proposition will not convincing to hold. Telling teachers beliefs not only insp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82983193277 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50714940576 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4405940554 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.96 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184429593645 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591285173023 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643372799262 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141076236034 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594947230513 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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