Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern age, information is power. And the invention of internet is the greatest feat of human. Internet is the raft to provide rafts of information. For someone the slews of information surfing on internet is not boon but for others it is an immense choice. With this prompt I am pretty sure about the boon of information placed on my sides. For this reason, I am going to promulgate the following two important reason for further explanations.
The main reason is that internet information provides how to cut off communication. Communication is the ancient term that has been drifted in this present age. We the human beings are social. We need to follow some code of conducts for living, to transfer our mores to our next progeny. The importance of communication will crystalize by my example. When I was born in a remote village of Bangladesh. One that time, the internet was not widespread enough. We used to visit our relatives house to meet but now it is possible by connecting with video chats on different social medias. Also, we were writing letter to our cognizant peoples but now by the boon of mail, it is not needed to write on the paper. As you can see, different levels of communication is now possible then our time by using internet information in an effective way. That is also faster and efficient.
Another reason is that by using information from internet now it is possible to conduct different business online. In todays world business is quite easy and fast because the sellers are now always gets the update from online. To be more specific, as I was grown in my village and also scarcity of internet. We were used to go to the market for selling our products. That took a lots amount of time, a large distance, and also the risk to face the possible chance of robbery. In comparison our time with now, these risk is gone. Because, in online there is a vast security of seller account. This experience taught me that, by doing business in online is faster, efficient and privacy ensured. That came from the precise internet information.
In sum, there would be jumbling position to prove the omen of internet information, but the above proclamations are not unrecognizable. Not only information from internet will make us a competent in connection with family, friends and relatives but also provides an avenues of mercantile areas where an efficient and fast commerce is possible. So, we should accept and recognize the fruitful information of the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nication will crystalize by my example. When I was born in a remote village of Bangl...
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Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... our time by using internet information in an effective way. That is also faster and efficient. ...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to going', 'used to gonna'.
Suggestion: used to going; used to gonna
... and also scarcity of internet. We were used to go to the market for selling our products....
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...face the possible chance of robbery. In comparison our time with now, these risk is gone. ...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our time with now, these risk is gone. Because, in online there is a vast security of ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an avenue' or simply 'avenues'?
Suggestion: an avenue; avenues
...friends and relatives but also provides an avenues of mercantile areas where an efficient ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82093023256 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80520357859 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509302325581 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8181392032 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4827586207 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8275862069 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.793103448276 5.45110844103 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207227515254 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518972658635 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473951953795 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132928994812 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222402043048 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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