Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Both of the reading and the listening about of effect literature in culture and popularity of literature .The author of the reading passage argues that reading less literature has bad effect in culture . Meanwhile, the lecturer insists that today other things has effect in culture.
To begin with, while the reading passage states that people just read literature can imaginations and for understanding language , The lecturer counters by insisting that literature can not only help to imaginations .Other subject exist that do seem job like science writing history do seem job ; And this subject has same quality.
In addition, the lecturer acknowledges that in today people prefer other entertainment or read self-book. According to the reading this entertainment has bad effect in culture .The entertainments are reasons for reduce the level of culture. However, The professor states that now the culture has change and has many forms like a good movie . This forms are as well as novels and poems.
As a final point, although the reading mention that Good writers today is exist but level readers is very low . The professor stats that modern literature is very hard to understand. So writers also has some effect in reduce support literature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21393034826 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7602541067 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4198992876 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771326278066 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031968409211 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03905830464 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048016749251 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262599613143 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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