Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As we all know, children have propulsion engines which are eager them to know a lot about everything. few multitudes opine that teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom but other ponder they should not. I believe that students are smart and have a great sense to get all positive and negative signals which sometimes cause them to make wrong decisions in their lives. In the following, I will pinpoint some reasons which support my idea.
First, students are young and don't have the correct perspective about all sides of politics or society. They can easily get an emotional decision. In my judgment, it is important to let them know everything clearly without any judgment and decision-making about certain events. these can help them to know every side but not to attend to judgment.
another reason is, that schools are places for learning and communication between students and teachers. If teachers explain their view's in their classes it makes the conflict between students and other teachers. Some students because they don't have experience and love their teacher get false respect about the certain views and it makes them be in conflict and depose with other students. If students are adults and have certain knowledge and information about their society it may not be harmful to teachers to say and express their views. For example, in university, professors can tell their views about politics conditionally, but at schools, it makes critical issues.
To the short long story, judging from my personal experience, that are several reasons to agree with this statement that teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Arguably the most important issue and an initial recommendation for alleviating stress are prevented to making chaotic by telling personal respect to people who do have not certain roles in politics or society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14240506329 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62935456868 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4958646576 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319673179982 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113676536902 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118561560764 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203297520724 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100823336584 0.0645574589148 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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