Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that teachers contribute a lot when it comes to students' life. It is known that students spend almost eight hours at school were share with classmates and professors. Although everyone is free to express their thoughts concerning social and political topics; if a tutor gives students to know their point of view, it could tremendously affect students' point of view. With this in mind, I agree with the statement that teachers should tell students neither their political nor social views.
First of all, some teachers don’t agree with some changes in our society over the years, so they can give views that many students can found an old fashion point of view. For example, I remember when I was at school, my history teacher was giving us her opinion about a few particular topics and someone asked her if she was okay with the LGBT community. She tells us that it was inappropriate. My teacher explained to us that she wasn't in favor of it for people who were homosexuals were sick. After some days, most of the students were looking at her differently.
Secondly, I don't think is appropriate that teachers should talk about their political thoughts since it may affect and change the way students think. Everyone has the right to choose their political views but personally, I don't believe that is okay sharing with people where you have a student-teacher relationship. For instance, last year we were having elections in my town and everyone is free to choose which candidate is the best. When my teacher told us that he was supporting one specific candidate and he pointed out their point of view, there was a total change in my class concerning which candidate was supporting.
Teachers can indeed inform students about social and political teachers since they are the instructors. However, they should tell students their point of view due to their views could cause some problems. Teachers should keep very objectives at the moment to be with students.
In conclusion, since I had some teachers who share their views with my class and it didn’t go well. I don’t believe teachers should share their views about society and politics with students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85488126649 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49440445637 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493403693931 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8647030695 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319770952447 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118528147022 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082244828684 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21668114826 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741077742146 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.