Nowadays, the technology has become the valuable and inherent part of our daily life. Regardless of the negative impacts of the rapid growth of those technologies on people's behavior, it also has many positive influences on us in a direct and indirect ways. Because everything on the Earth dependent on the technologies and the electronic devices have become the best friends of people, I think it makes the world more engaging place to live for us.
To begin with, the technologies allow us to do everything easily by using it. For example, we do not have to wash our clothes with our hand anymore, we have to only click on the button of the washing machine and everything done within a few minutes. Moreover, it provides us with much information and also the electronic devices, especially smartphones give us a chance to connect with worldwide and to be well-informed about the events happening all around the world. There is almost no one exists in this world who live without the internet and social media, because it clarify them from the society a lot. Take my grandmother as an example. At first, she did not like the electronic devices because she thinks it makes people lazy, but after use it to access an information, she really liked it and now she uses it more than I do.
Furthermore, one of the most engaging things that people do is traveling, which is the best way to gain experience and enjoy the exotic views of other countries. I think the technologies make the traveling more enjoyable and also affordable for everyone. If the airplanes, cars and other transportation were not invented, people have to pay bunch of money on it in order to travel only a few miles. Also, using the technology such as camera, people can leave a glorious view and experience and share it with their loved ones. For example, because of the Olympiad, I traveled to Vietnam and Italy without my family. It was amazing to see how beautiful the nature is and also the historical museums were admiring. But what if I did not have anything to took the pictures of it, my family could not see the real photo of those things by themselves.
All in all, the technology were invented to make life more outstanding and easier for the people. Regardless of some negative impacts of those, its pros considerably outweigh the cons of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clarifies'?
Suggestion: clarifies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7181372549 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70142851519 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.384329597 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.944444444 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134167973486 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416896556657 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441303992169 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07783218571 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442062519376 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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