The decisions are made every day and every time because without any crucial decision no one can develop. However, there is a controversial question about the vital decisions that have an impact on the future is influenced by young people or not. I think because the future is dependent on the young generations, the decisions that influence the future should be affected by them.
Above all, most famous people who affect society the most are relatively young compared to the age of whole mass. Because celebrities respected by many people and their voice and opinion can travel across the country to the world. Moreover, there are many educated young people because society requires to be like this. For example, one of my teachers is twenty-five years old who has a master's diploma and many years of experience. I think society changes a lot from the past, because back then people are not eligible to attend school because of their age. Nowadays, people are freer and have opportunities to improve themselves from many sides.
Another reason is, I think it is unfair if the young people do not have any effect on the crucial decisions of the future because of the whole future only dependent on the younger generations. Instead of making choices for them, it is beneficial for both to the young people and the society if the older people advise and encourage them to make a right decision. Furthermore, technology is rapidly developing nowadays which is the invention of youths. Also, because the younger ones are more capable to adapt with new technologies, they have more knowledge about the technological inventions that is the thing the society build by. So, I think there is no reason that young people do not influence the vital decisions.
All in all, the future is formed for young generations by the older ones, so, the older people should teach the young people about how to make a right choice rather than making it themselves for the youths.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Disagree
disagree -famous people young-they influence th...
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Line 6, column 388, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'masters'' or 'master's'?
Suggestion: masters'; master's
...hers is twenty-five years old who has a masters diploma and many years of experience. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96358543417 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58215602879 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481792717087 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4571985834 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251236347921 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977256693717 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700705944656 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147595835069 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509667744432 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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