A life fully depends on relationships between people. No one could live without any communication and interaction which brings us to an important question. Some people believe that keeping a few best friends throughout your life is better. Nevertheless, others think that you need to make many new friends live happily. From my point of view, even though your old friends are very valuable, it is always better to meet and make friends with new people.
Above all, the ability to make many new friends encourages you to relate well with people. Also, the facility to interact with people will lead a person to success. A prosperous person is surrounded by many people, which gives them no chance to avoid making friends. Furthermore, it will encourage your ability to understand everyone you meet because you are familiar with many unusual behaviors. For instance, if a person has a weak-minded friend, they already know how to talk to or sustain this kind of people. Also, because a person has many friends, they will get advice on one problem from many different angles. I think this will help them to make the right choice in a crucial situation.
Another reason is, the ability to make many new friends will open a whole new world for people because everyone has his own unique personality and perspective which makes him an individual. Moreover, it will encourage you to gain a comprehension of everything. From my personal experience, when I go to an event or a club, I prefer to make as many friends as possible. As a result, I have friends who work and study in different fields, which helps me to get an understanding of a broad range of knowledge in every subject.
All in all, the pros of the ability to making new friends outweigh the cons. Moreover, I think leaving your old friends is not same a making many new ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...hey will get advice on one problem from many different angles. I think this will help them to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.753125 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67927338272 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7636975408 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248826020784 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888399601221 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688905473605 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167947941334 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209663147163 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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