Television advertising plays a very important role in people's lives. The main agenda of T.V advertising is to make people aware of the product, spreading knowledge, provide the option, marketing its product, and connect to the audience. I disagree with the statement that young kids from age 2 to 5 years should not be exposed to the T.V advertisement. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the T.V advertisement is providing a wide source of information related to awareness. It is the mode by which government/company can connect and spread their message to the people of all ages. There are several advertisements telecast on the T.V such as awareness of diseases, health issues like(T.B, Dengue, Cancer, and HIV, etc), polio drops, population control, tree plantations, pollution, education, and child exploitation. Take an example of child exploitation, countries like India where parents hesitate on having a conversation with children on issues like child abuse. By watching, these advertisements are not making children aware but also enable them to differentiate between good and bad.
Secondly, there are so many ads which teach children to eat or drink healthy. Children easily convinced by these ads and they try to follow what have they watched in ads. They learn so many things organically by watching these ads. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was small. I used to watch those Complan ads. According to their ads, it helps in order to increase height. So, I started to drink milk with Complan. As s result, I follow this till now. We all know that drinking milk is very essential for our body.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that T.V advertisements are important for all group. This is because it makes children aware of their surroundings and they are able to learn quickly by following these advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03134796238 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02960825098 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9894319897 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4285714286 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177074958192 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473508573131 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536333056173 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106726766755 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640586290264 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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