Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the
busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to
be polite to each other.
Being polite is the best way to socialize with other people in today’ life. So, it is important to behave ourselves in our life. Some people believe that we have to be polite despite hard life, other do not think so. In my opinion, I believe that we should be polite in our society for two reasons which I elaborate on them in the following essay.
First of all, people may not be polite in today’s crowded society because they do not have enough time to learn how to behave with each other. In other words, people do not spend most of their time on teaching their children the proper ways of living. As a result, in the near future children will have a lot of issues and problems in communicating with their peers. My experience is a compelling example of what I mean. My friend was raise by his parents who did not have enough time to teach their child how to behave with other people. So, now he is not tremendously polite with others since he does not know how to control his emotions and not to be /impolite/rude. As a result, he has a lot of problem in making contact with other people and does not have any friends yet. If his parents had taken more attention on their kid, he would not have become rude. So, this example shows how it is important to be polite in your life.
Secondly, in today’s life everyone has competitive circumstances which they interact with in their job. This may cause a lot of pressure and stress on people’s body. Consequently, it may results in a situation in which people may be angry. While in the past there were not competitive situation and everyone was able to tolerate problems and behave properly. My parents’ example is plausible evidence about what I mean. They worked in a way that they did not experience any pressure in their job. Thus, they live in a manner that they can easily alleviate their stress and emotions because of the prosperous and simple work. On the other hand I have a lot of trouble working in my firm because of competitive way. So, I have a lot of physical problems that may be affected by my issues during my working time, and I most of the time I am very and extremely rude with my friend and peers.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should be polite with our friends in our job or during our life. This can be related to hectic life and because of competitive jobs in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... be /impolite/rude. As a result, he has a lot of problem in making contact with other people and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44545454545 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55606150419 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9989583152 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.79166666667 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186789629184 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622432033542 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698181336713 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130760094832 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734270932952 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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