Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to what type of work mode is more important to people's development has been brought to the attention of the public. Relevant authorities are urged that accomplishing tasks quickly and risk making mistakes are more essential than fulfilling allocations slowly and high accuracy. From a personal point of view, the above statement is agreeable for some reasons as below.
To begin with, spending a little time finishing the job means that employees have some spare time to see other things as important as missions. To be more specific, if individuals could complete projects with a bit of time, they probably possess a number of hours to do valuable affairs that could also push them to acquire more progress, such as learning some advanced knowledge related to their majors or checking the tasks they have accomplished. On the contrary, if staff take a lot of time to finish merely small assignments, they definitely do not get the spare time to do anything else which could also play an important role in their accomplishments. Therefore, people should achieve their target missions more quickly so that they would have more possibility to obtain huge improvements than fulfilling the distribution slowly.
What is more, with the rapid development of society as well as prodigious progress of science and technology, a company with slow productivity would be easily eliminated by the community. The popularity of technology has produced many advanced machines and equipment. Through using those modern products mentioned above, firms could implement their production goals more quickly and gain greater benefits eventually. Under these circumstances, if some enterprises still produce merchandise investing plenty of time, how could they compete with companies that get things done really fast? For example, in the past, people used their hands to weave clothes. The process was very time-consuming and inefficient so that it could not meet the need of the society. With the advent of plenty of modern machines, they have sped up production and earned recognition around cities. Therefore, the old way of weaving cloth may gradually disappear in the whole nation.
Finally, finishing projects slowly could not guarantee everything is correct. When people accomplish work carefully and seriously, it is difficult to ensure that there is no error in the whole process because it is hard to complete the assignments perfectly. From what was discussed above, individuals could not assure to do one thing with no mistake even if they pay much attention and time to it.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, both individuals and companies should complete the work with the limited time since they could make full use of that time they have left to do something as significant as the tasks, thus they would not only obtain more achievements but also receive a good reputation in society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20127118644 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84223741503 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0363828765 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.210526316 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8421052632 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185552680242 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057591994205 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473401483953 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121107928258 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554386190608 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.