Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that the efficiency of work is of paramount importance, and every person carries a method to reach an acceptable efficiency. In this regard, an unavoidable question that always has been the topic of controversy is whether a person must put the time in the priority of his or her way of doing the job or give more importance to preciseness by taking time as much as is needed. I personally believe that although speed in accomplishing a task is essential, accuracy is more vital. In what follows, I will support my perspective.
First and foremost, it is no secret that accuracy in doing tasks helps a person progress in his or her job. If an individual keeps accomplishing tasks precisely, people will trust him or her in future tasks, leading to increased credibility. Taking time to complete a task with the highest quality possible indicates that a person cares about doing his or her job. For example, a freelancer who does all of his or her duties as precisely as possible will be more trusted for future works. Such a person is capable of giving assurance to his or her customers to give their money back if he or she cannot accomplish it properly, which leads to more trust from the customer. In addition, the previous customers will recommend this person to their friends and coworkers, which causes a higher income.
The second reason that I would like to mention is that putting speed before accuracy does not necessarily result in a speed-efficient outcome. Accelerating doing the work raises the possibility of more mistakes, which must be corrected. It is well known that finding mistakes and fixing them is a time-taking process. Furthermore, In today's world, most jobs are being done in groups, and everyone's work has an unavoidable effect on the others'. For instance, imagine that an engineer who works for NASA miscalculates something to get to the result faster. There is no doubt that the whole project will come to a failure that costs a tremendous amount of money for the government.
To sum up, by taking into account all the above reasons, in spite of the fact that pace is essential in doing tasks, what is the most influential key in doing work is exactness. In the end, It suffices to mention "slow is smooth, smooth is fast."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, by and large, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84395673296 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.863338438 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.555555556 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117170462295 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381501509228 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397121426187 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769074716915 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310568228614 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.