Personally, I disagree that sections of sports and social activities are as important as sections of classes and libraries in universities. Sports and social activities sections can not receive the same amount of funds as classes and libraries sections. I feel this way fro three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, purpose of acadamic institutions are always researching and teaching. These most valuable parts in campus provide robust basis for future world, and this is why universities and colleges existed. If we allocate resources at the same level on sports and social activities, it may let others confuse about what direction that universities and colleges want to head for. Therefore, we must employ large segment of funds of school into classes and libraries, rather than leisure parts of school.
Second, resources are scarce, so they should be used wisely. Not matter where you live, what position you are, how much money you have, you are always constrained by the limited resources. It means that we should use our funds or time wisely to get the best consequence we want. As a result, we should consider the future vision of school and make a suitable plan to get this goal. I believe that a reasonable administrator of campus would not choose the plan of giving the same amount of money on leisure parts as on researching parts.
Third, these are always alternatives of leisure parts of school. Students can always find another choies on leisure part of their life, and it will never be stucked if school doesn't provide any leisure instrument. In addition, there are plenty of activities outside campus. It never be the question for st
In conclusion, I think that universities and colleges are founded for the purpose of learning and researching, instead of raising the physical lives' quality. Classes and libraries, which are the most important basis of researching, will always be the most valuable parts in campus and should own the biggest part of resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04776119403 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71425204782 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0457350994 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181431870011 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591021698279 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602496213539 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101784086833 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680810510639 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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