Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some believe that sports and social activities should not be as cared as classes and libraries. But I disagree with that and believe it should be equally cared. I am giving three reasons for taking this stand.
First of all, sports and social activities keep the student healthy physically and mentally. For example, I had a friend at collage. He never try to play or joining any social function. Eventually he had been very unhealthy and couldn't attend classes regularly. As a result, he ended up with bad grades and it gives him pain in the long run. So, when we only give importance to academic activities and not try to take care about sports and social activities, it will eventually hampared the students life. Thus equal financial support should be given to the co-curriculam activities.
Secondly, It will build strong communication and networking skills in student's life. For instance, I was very shy in school but when I entered into college, my life was changed completely. One of my teacher convinced me to do play cricket in college. It helped me a lot to build my communication skills because cricket needs good communication between players. At the end of college these skill give oppurtunity to do better in my working life. So, equal financial support should be justified for sports and social activities.
Finally, a good colleges is accepted as good when it has parallel co-curricullar activites and that's attracted new students to admit that good college. For example, my best friend was confused where to admit. He considered good college where it has good sports and social activites. He was a dancer and football player. So he decided to take admision to to that collage which has this option so that he can play football and perform his dance.
In conclusion. this statement is not easy to take a side because it is such an complex matter. However, I am fully convinced to agree with equal finncial support for sports and social activities for this above mentioned reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...le, I had a friend at collage. He never try to play or joining any social function....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...entually he had been very unhealthy and couldnt attend classes regularly. As a result, ...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...vities, it will eventually hampared the students life. Thus equal financial support shou...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'these skills'?
Suggestion: this skill; these skills
... between players. At the end of college these skill give oppurtunity to do better in my wor...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'college'?
Suggestion: college
...d social activities. Finally, a good colleges is accepted as good when it has paralle...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s parallel co-curricullar activites and thats attracted new students to admit that go...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... player. So he decided to take admision to to that collage which has this option so t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nd perform his dance. In conclusion. this statement is not easy to take a side be...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... easy to take a side because it is such an complex matter. However, I am fully con...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with equal finncial support for sports and social activities for this above men...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73741852986 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0063238335 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6086956522 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7826086957 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230688244892 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660137045419 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714093979021 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140473696094 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603180932827 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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