Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields rather than just their major subjects.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields rather than just their major subjects.
University is the place where students take and finish their graduation. Different universities has different requirements. Some people think that universities should require students to study just their major subjects while others think that universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields. In my view, I agree with that universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields rather than just their major subjects. I agree with side because two reasons, which I will explore in this following essay.
First of all, by requiring students to study many different fields by universities, students will have good income source in their future. This will make them secure. In this competitice era, career scope changes as time change. But if students have knowledge more than just their major subjects, they will be safe to survive. My own experience is a great example of this. When I was graduate student in an University of Ahmedabad, Government hospital, my university required all students to study music and physical activities with my major subject biology. After my graduation, I had to move in Chicago, where my foreign degree of medical assistant was not considered. But I was not depressed because I have the knowledge of music playing. I have 2 to years of experience of part time a music teacher, so I started the teaching classes of music instruments playing. As a result, I could earn $ 5000 per month. I could study physical therapy assistant by saving that money in an university of Illinois.
Besides that, by requiring students to study many different subjects by universities, students will get excitement to study. By studying same major subjects, they will feel a frustation. As a result, they won’t be able to finish their major effectively. My own past experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in an University of Illinois Chicago, it required students to study only same subjects in their major subjects. My major subject was the biology. I had to study different level of biologics for an example, biology 160 human anatomy, biology 161 human physiology and biology 130 microbiology. I was bored after memorizing same stuff because it did not give me an entertainment as I had before in my home country university. This example shows how’s it beneficial for students if their universities require them to study different subjects rather than their major subjects.
To sum up, I strongly agree with that universities should require students to study different subjects rather than just their major subjects. This way, students will get extra good income source in future to survive. They will have excitement to study different subjcets rather being bored by studying same major subjets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... of all, by requiring students to study many different fields by universities, students will h...
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Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...of this. When I was graduate student in an University of Ahmedabad, Government hos...
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Line 4, column 777, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ing. I have 2 to years of experience of part time a music teacher, so I started the teach...
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Line 4, column 894, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$5000'.
Suggestion: $5000
...ents playing. As a result, I could earn $ 5000 per month. I could study physical thera...
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Line 4, column 977, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...erapy assistant by saving that money in an university of Illinois. Besides that, ...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...es that, by requiring students to study many different subjects by universities, students will...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... finish their major effectively. My own past experience is a compelling example of this. When I...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mpelling example of this. When I was in an University of Illinois Chicago, it requ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, while, as a result, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2493.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85379650888 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40251572327 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5339945061 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.611101995411 0.236089414692 259% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18483934397 0.076458572812 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210729955309 0.0737576698707 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.522047753845 0.150856017488 346% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.274762041209 0.0645574589148 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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