Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At university an colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use the specific reason and example to support your answer.
These days in some universities and colleges, the sport and social activities are the most important part of the school program, and the authorize consist of the same budget for this kind class. I disagree with this decision because the sports activities have a positive impact from social and health perspective. This essay attends to examine these two factors regard to sports activities.
In the first step, focusing on the sport class in the university has completely advantage for the student, because it can decrease disruptive behavior in the social context. by a way of explanation, developing the sport instrument have shown to invite individual in the university and society to participate in some event as well as running at the exact time. However, individual sport can count for some people who have aggressive behavior. Especially, between teenagers is commonplace. Besides, it is necessary to say that, it should be considered by the parent to enforce their children resort to attend this kind of competition like running. For instance, half the ones between 19 and 25 have competed in the soccer match in the USA. By this fact, other people when watching the children and teenagers, they decide to play or act as their children. And society goes to one way of enhancing the behavior of the people. Consequently, the educational system should take part in a decision to showing the benefit of sports classes and activities for people to understand the level of social life.
Additionally, a black side of addiction is having a dangerous illness like cancer about the breathing system which is originated from smoking. Parents should focus on investing their budget on sport for showing the advantages of sport for avoiding this kind of cancer. In particular, these problems are routine in the less developed country, but it should be asked how it can be done? The answer is that increasing healthcare in for public is costly. Nonetheless, culturize has been tremendous and cheap for the government. This fact helps to enhance life expectancy for all people in society. Moreover, public health can be managed simply for every problem. For example, the outbreaking of COVID-19 has huge pressure on public health. To solve this outbreak, if all people obey the normal condition of health to prevent smoking, they will have strong immune to this harsh virus. So, sport can help to improve public health.
Finally, sometimes the government obey public awareness and should allocate financial support for this issue. We can mention public facilities such as a library which is a vital place for people to using the important material for their knowledge about their life. Despite social awareness, sport and social activities can help people in social behavior and public health context. And all the people should reshape their attitude again to face this topic. To sum up, the sport application has more effect on people.
In conclusion, I agree to pay attention more to the sport concept Because the only way for escaping social problems and illness depends on the financial resource which is invented by the government in the university and colleges. Also, we have a regular and strong society in the future against many problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...portant part of the school program, and the authorize consist of the same budget for this kin...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
... to examine these two factors regard to sports activities. In the first step, focu...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'advantaged'.
Suggestion: advantaged
... class in the university has completely advantage for the student, because it can decreas...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...ruptive behavior in the social context. by a way of explanation, developing the sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11069418386 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69104768157 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493433395872 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2415641711 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9310344828 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3793103448 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.62068965517 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149186818625 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415433696305 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471075747353 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103609063543 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458145061641 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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