Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university education is necessary for success in this world. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Achieving a successful life is the goal of most people. Reaching that goal requires working hard and a lot having solid motivation. Many people think that a high education is important but not essential for success. Others claim that attending university is the right path toward success. Personally, I agree with this and I believe that a university education is necessary to succeed in nowadays world university shapes a person’s personality and provide the necessary background to thrive in life.

First of all, going to university allows people to get a variety of life experiences and lessons. Indeed, students are faced with issues in their daily campus life as well as challenges at classes, so they learn a lot of coping ways. Thus they became adaptable, fast reacting and excellent problem solvers. Researchers have shown that individuals with this quality tend to be successful in their lives. In addition to this, students can benefit from exchanges programs and study overseas which is a very enriching experience. They got to see the world, to meet people whom life and success can be very inspiring.

Secondly, getting a degree after graduation offers many job opportunities increasing the chance of being employed and earning money. Companies would rather hire a person with a diploma that proves his/her skills. Some statistics reveled that graduated employees get higher salaries and they are more likely to get promotions. Furthermore, college is the best place to meet people, especially during workshops and seminar, and relations that can be useful in the future. In addition to this, many contests are held at university around brilliant economic or scientific ideas. The reward is most of the time a financial grant that gives birth to many start ups. For instance my friend created a micro company thanks to such programs and now it evolved to big trading company. For me he is a great example of fulfillment, he would never have reached if he did not attend university and win that grant.

Last, following a career in scientific research is only possible through an academic institution. Many students decide to pursue their studies and became bright scientist and powerful acknowledged personalities in their society. Universities provide the facilities for willing students to reach their goals by giving them grants and scholarship thus helping them to go through a promising career.

To sum up, the variety of opportunities and the enriching experiences that universities offer are more than essential to succeed in life. Consequently, it is impossible to deny the necessity for a high education in a building a successful future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23023255814 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90218116069 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5426216193 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7083333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202762739713 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512166522309 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538794146405 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112810525311 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671703780616 0.0645574589148 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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