University study is the most important aspect of student’s life for making careers. Students work hard for their bright careers. Some believe that students should choose a university that prepares them for high paying careers while others don’t agree with this viewpoint. In my opinion, it is not important for students to choose that university which only prepares them for a high paying careers. I have this opinion for few reasons that I will explore as follows.
First and foremost reason is that students should follow their goals and ambitions in their life. They should do their dream job even if it’s less paying. If they chase their dreams rather than money, then they will lead a successful life. For instance, my friend always wanted to become a doctor in her life. She knew the fact that only few experienced doctors are highly paid. Instead of choosing the university that prepares her for high paying careers, she preferred to attend the medical university and followed her dreams and passion. Few days back, I talked to her and she told me that choosing a medical university was the best decision she made in her life. Although her salary is not very fancy but she is satisfied with what she is doing for the welfare of community. So, this clearly illustrates that it is not important to restrict our choices to only those universities that focus towards high paying careers.
In addition to this, money is not everything in our lives. We should encourage students not to make money, the most important thing in their lives. For instance, I have seen many of my classmates who considered money, as the most valuable thing in their lives. With this idea in mind, they took universities that prepare them for high paying careers. They had no interest in the subjects taught in those universities but they prefer them rather than their interests and dreams. Although some of them are making good money, but they are not satisfied with the work they are doing. They don’t enjoy their work and are stressed out in their lives.
Furthermore, universities that focuses only on high paying careers of students are likely to be more expensive as compared to others. Last Saturday, I heard the news on television that students who goes on strike in these universities has increased drastically from the past year because of the increased fees and other expenses of students demanded by these universities. This definitely is a matter of concern because university life is a high time to focus on studies and if this is happening in universities, then it will definitely spoil the career of students.
To conclude, university study is the most contributing factor to brighten the career of students. Students should follow their dreams and goals and not rely on those universities which only prepared them for high paying careers. They should wisely choose the best university that suits their goals and interests. We should take steps to guide students about this so that they may rise like a sun and shine like a star in their lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215302491103 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.172597864769 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658362989324 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0640569395018 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.103202846975 0.0685040099705 151% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131672597865 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0427046263345 0.0351676179071 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54158185933 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249110320285 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0017793594306 0.00188951952338 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.076512455516 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195729537367 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017793594306 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3061.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 518.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90926640927 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343629343629 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22972972973 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181467181467 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102316602317 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54158185933 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.524397521467 82% => OK
Word variations: 49.1608667438 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.563158353 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.321428571 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.472972973 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.14659685864 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323331479351 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172301628501 0.103427244359 167% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110003331315 0.0752933317313 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477264335374 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127921069739 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123236328696 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884791178497 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329554487661 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0538415784742 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239765719054 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882329716159 0.0618886996521 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 24 Out of 30