Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
In this competitive world, education is considered to be an exceptionally approach to achieve individual goals. It is becoming a trend that parents are more involved in their children's education at every developmental stage.
First, parents are more involved in their children's early education. When you go into a book store, you can likely see a large number of books that teach potential parents how to prepare for their children's development. As you can see, these parents are involved in their children's cultivation, even when these babies are still in mothers' bodies. This is mainly because they believe that it is better to educate their children as early as possible. In other words, they want their children win at the starting line of the long running of life. It is impossible for parents in the past.
Second, parents are more involved in the education of very young children. According to some American study projects, the education at children's young ages is very important, which can significantly determine the future performance in high school and even in universities. Thus, parents are so busy selecting and taking up the positions in top private primary schools, generally, which are better than public ones. For example, in China, in order to send their children to top primary schools, parents spend up to 30,000 Yuan per year, which is not affordable for most families.
Third, parents also make contributions to their children's education when they are more that 12 years. At this developmental stage, it is time for parents to select top high schools, regardless the difficulty of this process. For instance, in America, it is important for parents to buy a house in a great district with very high education index, more than 8.0. Generally, a house in this kind of district is more expensive, even need double or triple price of a house with the same condition, but without good schools.
In conclusion, parents are highly involved in the education of their children, no matter how old their children are, but in the past, it is not a common phenomienon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('exceptionally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('approach') instead of another adjective.
...ve world, education is considered to be an exceptionally approach to achieve individual goals. It is beco...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...o into a book store, you can likely see a large number of books that teach potential parents how ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, third, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03170028818 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78057215808 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2873445339 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271115629884 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116758642592 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688314812798 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176526280987 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381129579234 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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