Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
In this competitive world, education is considered to be an exceptionally crutial approach to achieving individual goals. It is becoming a trend that parents are more involved in their children's education at not only very young ages but also relatively big ages .
First, today’s parents take a more active participation in their descendents' early enlightenment than before. When you go into a book store, you can likely see numerous guidebooks for teach potential parents to begin their prenatal education, such as eating a variety of fruits to absorb sufficient vitamin, listening to classic music, or visiting galleries to develop artistic taste, etc. As you can see, many parents are involved in their children's cultivation, even when these babies are still fetus in the womb. This is primarily because they hold the belief that education for their children should begin as early as possible, but not until they are born, so that they want their children win at the starting line. Nonetheless, can you imagine that parents did this sort of crazy thing in the past? No, you cannot.
Additionally, parents are more involved in the education of teenagers. According to some American research projects, the education at children's young ages is especially substantial to establish various abilities, just like adapting to groups and so on, which can significantly determine the performance in high schools and even in universities. Thus, parents spend much energy on helping their children get admissions from top private primary schools, generally, which are better than public ones. For example, in China, in order to send their children to top primary schools, parents spend up to 30,000 Yuan per year, which is indeed unaffordable for general families with an income about 60,000 every year.
Furthermore, parents still make contributions untill those young people are adults. At this developmental stage, it is time for parents to target top high schools, regardless of the possible difficulty. For instance, in America, for children’s excellent education and bright future, parents always consider to purchase a house in a great district with very high education index, more than 8.0. Generally, a house in this sort of districts is particularly expensive, even double or triple price of one with the same condition, but without good schooling resources.
In conclusion, parents are actively involved in the education of their offsprings, no matter how old they are, but in the past, it is not a common phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3184079602 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92293789455 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0293592703 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.625 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257485126681 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960238984998 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521420174562 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149417900149 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310297543832 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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