Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.
There are some ways to take information about a country, you can search about it in the internet or talks to its residents to find out about the country, but by these ways, the information you gathered are superficial. If you want to know profoundly about a country, about its ancient time, its ancient people or the course of its development during the time and so forth, the best option is to visit its local museums. In what follows I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to support my point of view.
The most important things about a country is its people. To know the people of a country, first, you need know their culture. You can find many things associated to the culture of a country in museums. For example, in a local museum in my hometown, there are some ancient painting on the leather which demonstrated some ritual ceremonies and traditional customs. So by analyzing and these painting you easily learn about the culture of our people. The same can be true of reading ancient inscriptions in museums.
Furthermore, development course of a country is another factor to know more about the country. If you search for a place to know about the course of a country development, museums is the best place to find out. There are some places in museums which are classified and allocated to specific fields. For instance, if you eager to learn about the trend of agriculture development in a country, you can easily find the place and conveniently be familiar with agricultural tools or realize how much the engineering make facility in cultivation from past to now. So visiting museums provide you the opportunity to be familiar with the development trend of a country.
Finally, visiting museums not only extend your knowledge, but also it don't take many times. You can get many information about a country just by spending two hours visiting a museum. So visiting museums to find out about a country can save your time.
To make a long story short, I believe visiting local museums is the best way to learn about a county. All aforementioned reasons point to my idea. However, an important issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used as a prescription for everybody and some counterexamples might exist
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79639175258 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78183774992 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44587628866 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.808131128 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.05 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338516765949 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107635959822 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817455455271 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195096017603 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049133929564 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.