Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching movies or reading books is a better way to relax than doing physical exercises.
Nowadays, people are really stressed out, they are extremely busy everyday in the highly competitive society. Thus, they need to find a good way to relax themselves. From my perspective, I think doing physical exercises is a much better means to relax than watching films or reading books.
First, while doing physical exercises, people can have chances to make more friends than before. People can talk to each other and joke around while doing exercises. Playing with friends is able to help people feel happier and more relaxed because they could forget some bad things temporarily. However, people have to watching movies or reading books in a very quiet place by themselves. In this case, they may feel more lonely and sad than before due to the pressure. Accordingly, doing exercises is better than watching movies or doing some readings to make people feel relief.
Second, there are lots of types of exercises outdoors. As we know, nature is the on of the best things to people to make them release. During the whole process, people can enjoy the beautiful sceneries, breath fresh air and taste delicious food while going outside. It is quite obvious that people could clear their minds and enjoy their sweat while doing exercises. On the contrary, people have to stay at homes or in the movie theaters which are extremely depressing while they watch films or do readings. As a result, doing physical exercises is a wiser choice to feel pleasure after working or studying for a long time.
Finally, people needs to be concentrated and thoughtful while watching films or reading books, if not, they might miss a few of plots or scenes so that they could not understand what are the movies or the books talking about. Therefore, people will also feel very tired after watching movies or reading papers, since they have been highly focus on the content. How can people get relaxed in this way?
We are all living a life of a high rhythm. As three reasons mentioned above, it is clearly to draw the conclusion that doing exercises is a much sound way to make people relax than watching movies or reading books indoors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, talking about, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87123287671 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37866604789 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7023489316 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319706419241 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107656080935 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993926672978 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207284635308 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650418043437 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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