Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s fast and contemporary life, one must not afford to waste his time by sticking with one problem for a long period without having particular solution of it. it is understandable that critical problem cannot be solved promptly by single individual. But it would become more readily by integrating more people into that. that is why I would prefer that people should solve queries often as a group rather than individually. my reasons for my standpoint elaborated below.
At first, we can get quick solution and save the time by involving group of people. More the people get participated, more the solution we will get. For an instance, nowadays, we can make plenty of groups on social media like whatsapp and facebook which provide good platform to interact with people. When I started to prepare my toefl exam, I did not know where to begin. So, I joined toefl study groups on facebook and whatsapp where I found thousands of people helping each other, sharing their knowledge and materials without any cost. These groups really helped me to solve my queries regarding the exam and helped me to build up my confidence.
Secondly, the group solution will be accurate because it will be analyzed by number of people before it come to conclusion. The corporate offices and multi-national companies are examples of this. they have board of directors in which every individual has his opinion and comprehensive decisions would be frequently made by experience and conviction of people in that board. Likewise, if problem concerns with large number of people, they prefer to make judgement based on voting where solution will be culminated according to majority of votes. Despite person’s shrewdness and intellectual, suggestions given by him might have biased perception and will not be able to see other side of the picture.
In this way, decision and solution made by group would always be accurate, quick and time saving rather than solving out by oneself. Sometime an individual efforts to navigate the solution might be end up in nowhere as they lack the guidance and experience of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, really, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08857142857 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77893093524 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8554242985 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221964345103 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650110296724 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386692031554 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133141212619 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268582369357 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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