“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.”
There is no doubt that homework benefits student in an astonishing level. The development of society nowadays has resulted in a higher requirement in which the assign projects have to adapt the innovation. In my humble opinion, the teamwork projects benefits students than the individual projects.
In the first place, team work helps enhance students’ soft skills. In fact, more and more reports about the lack of social skills in students, especially in the graduates. There is no doubt that technology development brings us the convenience and a higher standard of living. However, its drawbacks affect the young generation seriously. The internet provides enough conditions for them to create their own world and to be the prisoners in there. Teamwork is an appropriate solution since it requires student to interact with each other. As a result, they could learn how to solve the community problems throughout the smallest lessons. For example, the activities based on teamwork at the scout organizations have helped reduce the number of crimes in adolescent in US for recent years. So that, there is less burden of criminal level on the society in the future.
On another hand, the assign project based on teamwork is the best environment for the smart ideas to thrive. It is the fact that more and more subjects require students to consider the problem in many different aspects. In the project, they are allowed to show their natural-born skills. Many of them who have no idea about the main subject that is focused on could become an irreplaceable factor of the team. For example, a student who is good at literature could become the main narrator at the presentation, or a student who is good art could become the back-stage man to design the slides. At a result, students could understand themselves better instead of losing their confidence. In addition, teamwork creates a real society in small scale in which student could encounter a various set of characteristics. They could learn how to comprehend different kinds of people. The comprehend is the most important factor to make the world a better place.
Last but not least, individual projects might not serve the entire students in the class. It is certainly the fact that there are different levels of students. Many of them may not be endowed with the high ability to learn some certain subjects. Individual projects do not create the chance for them to be supported. They may have a negative emotion on this kind of subject. Even worse, they could drop school due to these unexpected feelings. It is a significant mistake to let a kid think that they are useless. When a seed of negative emotions is fed by the scare and shame, we may reap what we sow.
In conclusion, both individual and teamwork projects have their own advantages. However, in the society today, I completely support that student should be given the teamwork projects to reach their highest level.
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- The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
- The best way to solve the world s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion 73
- Most of the world's problems could be solved by international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
- To what extent do you agree or disagree with the following statement?“Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past” 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lps enhance students' soft skills. In fact, more and more reports about the l...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ire students to consider the problem in many different aspects. In the project, they are allow...
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Line 5, column 877, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o comprehend different kinds of people. The comprehend is the most important factor to make th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99594320487 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7643568807 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505070993915 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5160925412 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4516129032 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9032258065 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54838709677 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200963277772 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047899916527 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440934722713 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109207758354 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284616697522 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.