Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Workers are more satisfied when they do many different tasks during a workday than they do the same tasks all day.
Workers have been an effective part of developing constructions by implementing the designer's ideas, throughout human history. It is hotly- debate whether workers are satisfied with diversity in their tasks during a workday or they prefer to do the same task all day. Personally, I am of the confirmed opinion that workers are more satisfied with diversity in their tasks for two concrete reasons which have been stated in the subsequent lines.
The first worthwhile mentioning reason is that doing the same task over and over all day could be too boring for workers, which leads to a decrease in their productivity. In fact, when a worker does a specific duty for a long time loses his/ her enthusiasm so they will not be excited about their job. As a result, they will not value their job leading to be unsatisfied with their job. My work experience as an employee is an apt illustration of this. Last year during the construction of a building I was told that some of the workers do dedicate themselves to their duties; after having a deep conversation with them in person I realized that they are not happy with their works since their tasks were the same for days. Consequently, I made my mind to change their tasks frequently, which the results were unbelievable in which they had done their works before deadlines and they were more satisfied. Actually, the more task they did, the more did they satisfy with their job.
The second significant reason to be noted is that doing various works during a workday gives the workers the sense of being useful and helpful that results in more satisfying. As a matter of fact, when we, not just workers, have done different tasks at the end of the day e have a more positive view regarding our job. Back to my work experience, assigning workers with the same task all day was the main reason that workers were not satisfied at first given the sense of being useless. Never had I changed their task frequently, they would not have delightful with their job.
To wrap up what has been discussed, I strongly support the idea that workers are more satisfied with their job when they are assigned various tasks instead of the same ones all day long. I feel this way because doing the same work all day is too boring and makes them unsatisfied. Besides, having done different tasks during a day gives the sense of being useful to workers resulting in more satisfying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...struction of a building I was told that some of the workers do dedicate themselves to their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus, while, as to, i feel, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69103773585 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54799842392 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452830188679 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3984813304 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402226971635 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161471041037 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109364149843 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320031189326 0.150856017488 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391070585678 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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