Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for the job would be more satisfying.
Everybody, all over the world, is seeking a job which is anybody's desire to have. Opinions are divided to have a satisfying job no matter how long does it take to find and takes the job as soon as it is available no matter it is satisfying or not. Personally, it is my confirmed opinion that it worth waiting for the job which is our true calling. In the ensuing lines, I will present two concrete reasons to corroborate my stance.
The first reason that should be mentioned to defend my standpoint of view is that the more we are satisfied with our job, the more we are satisfied with our life. Our job is an integral part of our life so, its paramount role is unhidden to anyone. My young uncle is a great example to illustrate this. He used the opportunity and took a job which was well-paid but not satisfying; after two years of dealing with his job, he lost his appetite of going to work since his job was overwhelming that he became an angry and bad-mannered person, who was known as a happy and well-mannered one. Consequently, his wife divorced him on top he was fired. Had he taken such a satisfying job, he never faced those difficulties.
The second obvious that should be noted to support my outlook is that being satisfied with the job we have is one of the most effective reasons to enhance our productivity at work. To be more specific, if we do not satisfy with the job we have, our productivity is limited since we do not have any desire to move forward the ladder in our job. My own experience demonstrates convincing evidence of this. After my graduation, two years ago, my friend and I were seeking a suitable job that took some time. As a result, my friend took a job which was not his true calling that a while he could not stand his job and resigned. whereas, I took my time and managed to find such a job was my dream ones and now I have got promoted once just in two years.
To wrap up what has been discussed, I strongly support the idea that we should the job which is satisfying because it influences our life, largely. Besides, satisfied with our job equals having more productivity in our job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...as soon as it is available no matter it is satisfying or not. Personally, it is my confirmed ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...e could not stand his job and resigned. whereas, I took my time and managed to find suc...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t the idea that we should the job which is satisfying because it influences our life, largely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, well, whereas, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37878787879 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60684840493 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497474747475 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1254845726 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273849705464 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100007864451 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780114325621 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19757017821 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161190642822 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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