Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
It goes without saying that working and dong duties are the most important parts of our lives. There has been a controversial debate among intellectuals as to whether doing different kinds of tasks makes workers more happy and satisfied. From my perspective, it is true that doing different types of tasks makes workers content, and two reasons to support my view are presented as follows.
To begin with, required to accomplish different duties each day, employees will be more successful individuals. It is not a secret to anyone that humans are considered as intelligent creatures that are interested in acquiring knowledge and information about various subjects and concepts; informed of novel and new things, we will definitely feel good about ourselves since we can quench our thirst. Doing different tasks every day helps workers to learn more and get information and as a result they are able to know more and feel satisfied with their jobs since they are sure that being aware of a lot of tasks makes them more successful, which is the desire of every individual. As you can see, in this vein workers are able to learn more which helps them to succeed and feel satisfied with the living. Rarely are there people who are interested in doing the same task every day.
Furthermore, having different responsibilities means having health. It is crystal clear that workers feel exciting when they be required to do and experience something new, such exciting helps them to enjoy working and prevents them from being overwhelmed with negative feelings or got depression. To put it in more vivid picture, my cousin Hawwra had difficulty coping with her job, she was required to collect data and organized them as a file in the computer. According to her, it was terrible to do a task every day. No longer did she get depression since there was no excitement task to do at work, so she resigned the job and now, she has a better job in which she can enjoy every moment. Had my cousin not quitted the job, she would be depressed. As you can see, the excitement and joy of tasks not being the same all the time is crucial since we will not be overwhelmed with stress and bad feelings during our professional lives.
In sum, some people I am sure would disagree with my view, having different task, employees become content. Not only will workers be able to more successful which makes them happy, they will also have an opportunity to get rid of negative feelings and enjoy the living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ontroversial debate among intellectuals as to whether doing different kinds of tasks makes wo...
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Line 2, column 806, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Rarely
...eed and feel satisfied with the living. Rarely are there people who are interested in doin...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ative feelings and enjoy the living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, as to, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78422273782 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61506431608 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477958236659 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7916467127 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.294117647 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321895709362 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112339981604 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078927055359 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202547530057 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340231382252 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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