Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
In today's progressive world because of competition between companies and factories nowadays they need more and more workers and they choose them very carefully, most of the time they choose workers who have more ability and be faster than another else because they have to be faster than other companies so as not fall behind so in many cases workers have to do different types of tasks in work place and they should adopt themselves with it. From my point of view it is very satisfiable for workers when they have many types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. I express two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
First, doing same tasks at the work in long time probably are very boring and after long time the workers could not have enough focus on it because doing same thing in long time is exhausts the brain and reduces its efficiency. When workers have opportunity to do different tasks in their work times they be more active and it causes refresh their body and brain before doing another duty and it is help them to have very small mistakes in their job and if they have mistake they can fix it easily. For example, last year I worked for Architecture Company and my job was a little different from my coworkers' jobs they should stay all the time behind laptops but I had other duties too and my job was more active so at the end of the day I felt less tired than them.
Second, when workers do many types of tasks in a day it helps them to know about different field of their job and be more professional in their job, also it encourage them to research about this various tasks and if they have a problem they can solve it by themselves. Moreover, this way increases their creativity. Working on different types of tasks helps people to thinks more and more. When people have chance to try different tasks they could easily find what they really like and interest in so in the future if they want change their career, they can choose new job better and also they can use their experience from their old job.
In conclusion, from my vantage point doing many different types of tasks to do during workday have many benefits for workers, first they feel less bored and they have less mistakes in their' work. Second, it helps them to be more professional an creative in their jobs also they can find their interested field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o they can find their interested field.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59810874704 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35556627972 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45390070922 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5721121938 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5625 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464580168482 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182642245395 0.076458572812 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162921420575 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335951361323 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11013168666 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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