Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Each member of the society has direct influence on his/her community. People with different social strata and age ranges are enthusiastic to have a vital role in the future of their society. Although people who are in middle age occupy high positions in the community, young people still put their effort into having a significant role in society development. I personally, advocate the idea that adolescents have a great influence on their society's future. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
To begin with, young people are the most active persons in the society as opposed to the older people who will retire in few years or children who do not enter to the society. In addition, young people have better physical conditions than other age ranges that indicates that many career are suitable for young employee rather than older one. For example, young soldiers defend borders against enemies in wars and their momentous roles in protecting the country cannot be denied.
Secondly, nowadays, adolescent have a great deal of power in their families. Young people are the most sophisticated people in their families, so parents rely on them completely and are confident about their abilities, knowledge, wisdom to name but a few. Therefore, young people orient their family's view in different aspect of life. For example, in my country, people were religious and superstitious in last decades. They have been affected by their offspring’s perspective gradually and now the majority of people substituted their religious ideas by the logic and modern perspective.
Last but not least, juveniles show themselves very eager to improve their society's future rather than the older people. They want to make the most of their youth, so they are more enthusiastic and effective rather than other age ranges. Young people have solidarity with each other and when they want some changes in their society, they take appropriate measures for achieving their desire and revolutionize everything they do not like. For example, in my country, young people participate in every election held in my country to declare their viewpoint about political or social issues. This clearly demonstrates that adolescent have significant role in the future of the society as a whole.
To sum up, young people affect the future of society significantly on the ground that they have physical strength, dominance on their families, and they are serious about their will.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun career seems to be countable; consider using: 'many careers'.
Suggestion: many careers
...an other age ranges that indicates that many career are suitable for young employee rather ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.245 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72753437192 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0476579629 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192460402732 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753627864683 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390454971698 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130559853815 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037507915948 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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