some people like participating in performance like theatrical or musical show, other prefer to be in a audience watching plays. which one do you prefer?
Performing art have certain benefits to the mind and body of an individual. Although some might maintain that acting is a very stressful job, I firmly contend that its advantages carry more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
One major reason is that stage shows help people think outside of the box and understand how to appraise a situation. They become more self-confident as a result of participating in such shows. In fact, performing arts have been regarded as one the best methods of improving one's self-confidence and self-esteem over time. People will become more confident going into unfamiliar situations which can help them a lot to deal with new challenges successfully. That is why people should take part in performing arts when they have the chances of participating in them.
Additionally, communication skill will also improve over time with exposure to such an environment. Theater is a collaboration of different people; hence, people could learn to cooperate better with each other. Feedback and discussion are important parts of a stage show.This will help people cooperate with others in the set which is one of the most important qualities of a healthy man. For example, I can recall my high school time, when me and my classmates prepared a show for our graduation ceremony. All of us expressed our opinions, then selected best ones, so we performed an enjoyable show. This show how a performance can help to a better communication with others.
To conclude, performing in stage is one of the best ways to improve one's confidence and communication skill. If anyone has the chance of playing a role, just takes it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06428571429 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01777049749 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6977786597 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.625 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160492470285 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521932770579 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362570393195 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905934209022 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367960484227 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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