do you agree or disagree with the following statement? young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That experiment and money play an important role in our society and most of the employees are old is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the advantages of the experiment in the organization of society, we will ponder over the influence of aged male much more scurpulously. this issue has recently been the topic of the debate among authorities.
I believe that, if an employee has most of the experiments, he will do her responsibilities better, and these are my justification, to begin with, once I went to a company where an aged employee worked. he was not only really kind but also very helpful. he did all of my work very soon and I came back home. hence I live old employee in companies, The second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that old authorities know the different view of problems. although they maybe fear and can't do risk, they don't do big mistakes. therefore, they are really dependable. the last but not the least, i believe an English proverb say's "old is gold" if we comprehensive on this proverb, we will understand aged males should be respectful and we should use their experiments.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well, it is hypothesized that young people can bring a new spirit in their company and they are both intelligent and nimble as well as brave. therefore, if I have a company, I would rather use young and old employees in my company.
by taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drown about the issue, underestimating the advantages of old people in our society is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to managing our life better than past, and can improve several aspects of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83279742765 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99688116538 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7504558842 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095223807842 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298845148359 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289724267245 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572192340991 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180581826932 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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