Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While some believe that young people have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole, I disagree with the statement for the following reasons that will be explored in the ensuing paragraph.
Firstly, young people are more likely to be aware of the new technologies that evolve so quickly nowadays. In other words, they are more familiar with machines and their complex functions than elder people. That is because of their advanced education compared to 100 years ago. Therefore, they have the required tools to change and improve society by being involved in decision-making and employing their knowledge for the sake of a better society. My personal experience is an illustration of this concept. My husband and I wanted to buy a new house and we were searching for our perfect house but, we were confused. Thus, we asked our son who was a great help to us. He suggested that we look for a smart house that allows all machines to be controlled with a remote control or through your phone. We took his suggestions seriously and got our dream house. This house turned out to be convenient and made our lives easier with this smart technology. If I didn’t involve my son in this crucial decision, we would have been looking for this house till now. Obviously, youth are critical members of any developing society. They have a major impact on improving society’s daily lives by providing ambitious perspectives.
Secondly, politically speaking; incorporating young people in decision-making is pivotal for society’s national security. To be specific, excluding youth and disparaging their standpoints harm the coherence of society. Throughout history, never did it end well when the elders in charge tried to shut down youth. That’s because youth have the desire and capacity to transform the world. And, are looking for opportunities to do so. Thus, accommodating them as a part of society will assist in conveying their energy and viewpoints to the right place. The civil rights revolution is a compelling example of this. If people in charge had involved these young people from the start, they wouldn’t have felt the urge to call for civil rights. Accordingly, youth are a part of society that can't be ignored or belittled. As a matter of fact, they keep society adhered together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ingly, youth are a part of society that cant be ignored or belittled. As a matter of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0205655527 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82842245185 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578406169666 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5849198094 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.375 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205523006158 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513363643818 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091271080618 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220007381161 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171479826256 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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