Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does.
Recently, the problem has been brought into focus that does our job has more influence on our sense of happiness or the living condition dose. Personally, has the issue been more visible that, definitely, job brings a host of joy to us than living environment.
To begin with, job provide more opportunities to communicate with others, which will help us make more friends and gain more happiness. Job always means cooperation, which means we have to work and discuss with our colleagues. By working together, we can find the person that hold the same value with us, find someone that worth trusting, someone merit a life-time friendship. We can share the feeling, play together and encourage each other to fulfill our dreams. It this fantastic? Another equally important aspect is that we can learn from others. Learn from their experiences and improve our capabilities of work, be a better person that we always want to be. Through these way, we truly can obtain the happiness.
Meeting with a number of people is but one of the many effects on our happiness. Another is that through doing our jobs, we can achieve great success. And success always has the same meaning of happiness. When a challenge task is assigned to us, by finishing the impossible mission, we can attain our personal value in the society, earn the admiration from others. Also, if we are good at our job, there are chances that we be promoted and get a decent salary, which means we can buy many things without hesitation. Furthermore, a better pay means a better economical foundation, means our relationship with families can be easier because we do not have to argue about buying things we cannot afford. And I believe this case is not rare.
Certainly, a good living condition can help us maintain a happy mood, and good environment do benefit our health. However, this effects just cannot compare to the influences brought by our job. Actually, doing a good job and getting promoted also can provide us the opportunity to move to a pleasant living environment. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that our job, do has more effect on our happiness than our living environment does.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...en brought into focus that does our job has more influence on our sense of happines...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'merits'.
Suggestion: merits
...nd someone that worth trusting, someone merit a life-time friendship. We can share th...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this way' or 'these ways'?
Suggestion: this way; these ways
...rson that we always want to be. Through these way, we truly can obtain the happiness. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196721311475 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.192037470726 0.158761421928 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0725995316159 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538641686183 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0889929742389 0.0685040099705 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0936768149883 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.03981264637 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65065392267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0257611241218 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.07962529274 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187353629977 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2202.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 376.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85638297872 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329787234043 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252659574468 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151595744681 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117021276596 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65065392267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523936170213 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.3085109883 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9047619048 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1302956391 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.1707193516 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 0.986013986014 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192652599699 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0974505876283 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0746574311562 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452345986856 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15547836593 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739525260306 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749764309463 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35160371615 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117824300431 0.067059652881 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165876127263 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781388913163 0.0618886996521 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.